Literature’s Most Desirable Heroes
I got this idea from a blog post on Mental Floss. These are my picks. Feel free to post yours in the comments!
10. Dr. Peter Blood, Captain Blood, Rafael Sabatini
. . . there entered now into his presence a spruce and modish gentleman, dressed with care and sombre richness in black and silver, his swarthy, clear-cut face scrupulously shaven, his long black hair in ringlets that fell to a collar of fine point. In his right hand the gentleman carried a broad black hat with a scarlet ostrich-plume, in his left hand an ebony cane. His stockings were of silk, a bunch of ribbons masked his garters, and the black rosettes on his shoes were finely edged with gold.
For a moment M. de Rivarol did not recognize him. For Blood looked younger by ten years than yesterday. But the vivid blue eyes under their level black brows were not to be forgotten, and they proclaimed him for the man announced even before he had spoken.
9. James Percy, The Inheritance, Louisa May Alcott
When the first greetings were over, Amy looked again at the face that had smiled so kindly on her as he took her hand.
It was calm and pale, as Arthur had said, with dark hair parted on a high, white brow, beneath which shone a pair of clear, soft eyes. He was tall and finely formed, with a certain stately grace that well became him. A quiet smile lit up his face and, as the soft light of the evening sun shone on it, Amy thought a beautiful and noble soul must lie within.
8. Joe Blomfield, Miss Pettigrew Lives for a Day, Winifred Watson
Joe was looking down at her: a big man, not a young man, possibly the early fifties. No sign of middle-aged spread. What might be called a well-preserved figure. A man looked better with a well-covered body in the fifties. He was immaculate in evening clothes: shirt-front gleaming, flower in the button hole. Massive head, powerful jaw, humorous eyes, no-fooling-me mouth, hair greying a little, bluff manner, genial, red face.
His gaze lighted on Miss Pettigrew’s face with surprise. Then his lips parted, his eyes lit, his face expanded, with a surprised, warm, friendly smile.
7. Carl Linstrum, O Pioneers!, Willa Cather
Carl had changed, Alexandra felt, much less than one might have expected. He had not become a trim, self-satisfied city man. There was still something homely and wayward and definitely personal about him. Even his clothes, his Norfolk coat and his very high collars, were a little unconventional. He seemed to shrink into himself as he used to do; to hold himself away from things, as if he were afraid of being hurt. In short, he was more self-conscious than a man of thirty-five is expected to be. He looked older than his years and not very strong. His black hair, which still hung in a triangle over his pale forehead, was thin at the crown, and there were fine, relentless lines about his eyes. His back, with its high, sharp shoulders, looked like the back of an over-worked German professor off on his holiday. His face was intelligent, sensitive, unhappy.
6. Dick Dewy, Under the Greenwood Tree, Thomas Hardy
Dick Dewy faced about and continued his tune in an under-whistle, implying that the business of his mouth could not be checked at a moment’s notice by the placid emotion of friendship.
Having come more into the open he could now be seen rising against the sky, his profile appearing on the light background like the portrait of a gentleman in black cardboard. It assumed the form of a low-crowned hat, an ordinary-shaped nose, an ordinary chin, an ordinary neck, and ordinary shoulders. What he consisted of further down was invisible from lack of sky low enough to picture him on.
5. Mortimer Lightwood, Our Mutual Friend, Charles Dickens
Reflects a certain ‘Mortimer’, another of Veneering’s oldest friends; who never was in the house before, and appears not to want to come again, who sits disconsolate on Mrs Veneering’s left, and who was inveigled by Lady Tippins (a friend of his boyhood) to come to these people’s and talk, and who won’t talk. . . .
Mortimer raises his drooping eyelids, and slightly opens his mouth. But a faint smile, expressive of ‘What’s the use!’ passes over his face, and he drops his eyelids and shuts his mouth. . . .
There is that in the indolent Mortimer, which seems to hint that if good society might on any account allow itself to be impressible, he, one of good society, might have the weakness to be impressed by what he here relates. It is hidden with great pains, but it is in him.
4. Fitzwilliam Darcy, Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen
Mr. Darcy soon drew the attention of the room by his fine, tall person, handsome features, noble mien, and the report which was in general circulation within five minutes after his entrance, of his having ten thousand a year. The gentlemen pronounced him to be a fine figure of a man, the ladies declared he was much handsomer than Mr. Bingley, and he was looked at with great admiration for about half the evening, till his manners gave a disgust which turned the tide of his popularity; for he was discovered to be proud; to be above his company, and above being pleased; and not all his large estate in Derbyshire could then save him from having a most forbidding, disagreeable countenance, and being unworthy to be compared with his friend.
3. Allan Woodcourt, Bleak House, Charles Dickens
I have omitted to mention in its place that there was someone else at the family dinner party. It was not a lady. It was a gentleman. It was a gentleman of a dark complexion—a young surgeon. He was rather reserved, but I thought him very sensible and agreeable. At least, Ada asked me if I did not, and I said yes. . . .
I believe—at least I know—that he was not rich. All his widowed mother could spare had been spent in qualifying him for his profession. It was not lucrative to a young practitioner, with very little influence in London; and although he was, night and day, at the service of numbers of poor people and did wonders of gentleness and skill for them, he gained very little by it in money. He was seven years older than I. Not that I need mention it, for it hardly seems to belong to anything.
I think—I mean, he told us—that he had been in practice three or four years and that if he could have hoped to contend through three or four more, he would not have made the voyage on which he was bound. But he had no fortune or private means, and so he was going away. He had been to see us several times altogether. We thought it a pity he should go away. Because he was distinguished in his art among those who knew it best, and some of the greatest men belonging to it had a high opinion of him.
2. John Thornton, North & South, Elizabeth Gaskell
Now, in Mr. Thornton’s face the straight brows fell low over the clear, deep-set earnest eyes, which, without being unpleasantly sharp, seemed intent enough to penetrate into the very heart and core of what he was looking at. The lines in the face were few but firm, as if they were carved in marble, and lay principally about the lips, which were slightly compressed over a set of teeth so faultless and beautiful as to give the effect of sudden sunlight when the rare bright smile, coming in an instant and shining out of the eyes, changed the whole look from the severe and resolved expression of a man ready to do and dare everything, to the keen honest enjoyment of the moment, which is seldom shown so fearlessly and instantaneously except by children. Margaret liked this smile; it was the first thing she had admired in this new friend of her father’s; and the opposition of character, shown in all these details of appearance she had just been noticing, seemed to explain the attraction they evidently felt towards each other.
1. Captain Frederick Wentworth, Persuasion, Jane Austen
“I can listen no longer in silence. I must speak to you by such means as are within my reach. You pierce my soul. I am half agony, half hope. Tell me not that I am too late, that such precious feelings are gone for ever. I offer myself to you again with a heart even more your own than when you almost broke it, eight years and a half ago. Dare not say that man forgets sooner than woman, that his love has an earlier death. I have loved none but you. Unjust I may have been, weak and resentful I have been, but never inconstant. You alone have brought me to Bath. For you alone, I think and plan. Have you not seen this? Can you fail to have understood my wishes? I had not waited even these ten days, could I have read your feelings, as I think you must have penetrated mine. I can hardly write. I am every instant hearing something which overpowers me. You sink your voice, but I can distinguish the tones of that voice when they would be lost on others. Too good, too excellent creature! You do us justice, indeed. You do believe that there is true attachment and constancy among men. Believe it to be most fervent, most undeviating, in F. W.
I must go, uncertain of my fate; but I shall return hither, or follow your party, as soon as possible. A word, a look, will be enough to decide whether I enter your father’s house this evening or never.”
Fun Friday: Whatevs, Tricky Parents, and Eye Candy

35 Modern Words Recently Added to the OED
by Lucas Reilly
Once again, it’s time to see what new words the august Oxford English Dictionary has added to its pages. This year’s additions include bromance, jeggings, noob, truthiness, and my favorite whatevs. What’s your favorite on this list?
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I got 7 out of 10. How did you do?
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A Tricky Way to Get Kids to Do Their Chores

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Costumed Characters . . . Out of Character

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Kitten Finds a Playmate
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Most Popular Eye Candy Post of the Week
(from my Facebook page)

Olympic Eye-Candy of the Day: Aldo Montano (Fencing, Italy/image from fabulousmag.co.uk)
Writer-Talk Tuesday: Tell Me a Story (of how you came up with your story)
One of my favorite things to do around the time I have a book coming out is to tell “the story behind the story”—or my inspiration for where a particular character or storyline came from.
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Here are the posts where I’ve told those stories:
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Where Do Stories Come From? (a brief glimpse at the origin of Stand-In Groom)
With Stand-In Groom, I wanted to use Peter Wingfield, whom I’d fallen for in the role of Methos in the Highlander TV series, as a hero in a romance novel. I also wanted to use the plus-size supermodel Emme as a heroine. This was around the time that I’d seen the movie The Wedding Planner, which, even though Matthew McConaughey was quite cute in it, really turned me off because for the resolution of the romance to come about, it meant that an engaged couple had to be torn apart.
MENU FOR ROMANCE: The Inspiration
When I wrote the first draft of Stand-In Groom (Happy Endings, Inc., as it was then known), I needed to surround Anne with family—as an orphan, sticking close to her extended family would be important to her—and I wanted her to be best friends with a cousin about her age. Enter Meredith Guidry, who was not only her cousin and best friend, but her protege—Meredith worked as Anne’s assistant event planner when Anne worked for Meredith’s parents’ company, Boudreaux-Guidry Enterprises, before Anne started her own business.
A CASE FOR LOVE: The Inspiration
Before I ever had the idea for a story about a wedding planner falling in love, I had an idea that I might one day write a contemporary-set story loosely based on the storyline of Pride and Prejudice (this was around the same time I came up with the idea for the story that would become Love Remains, loosely based on Persuasion, but that’s a tale for another time).
RANSOME’S HONOR: The Inspiration & Road to Publication
The character of William Bush changed the dynamics of how things worked for dear Horatio. William is an older, more experienced character, with a reserve and caution Hornblower doesn’t (yet) possess. In fact, the character of Lt. Bush in the movie so intrigued me that I went out and bought the book upon which this duplex of movies is based, Lieutenant Hornblower. Imagine my surprise when I opened it to discover that it’s written from William Bush’s viewpoint!
LOVE REMAINS–The Story Behind the Story
. . . he was totally my “type”: very tall and built like a football player, attractive without being “gorgeous,” outgoing (yes, somewhat flirtatious), and still a somewhat old-fashioned gentleman. (In other ways, he totally wasn’t my type—but that’s not important to this story.) In talking to him as we went about getting him official his first day of work, I learned he’d been in the army. Not only that, he’d been stationed in New Mexico . . . and not just anywhere in New Mexico, but at White Sands Missile Range—during the last year my dad was there. And even though I was in the death-throes of trying to get that second novel finished, I remember the “what if” scenario popping into my head: what if I’d met him when I was seventeen and he was nineteen when we both lived out there. I even went home and wrote down a few ideas.
THE ART OF ROMANCE–The Inspiration
The only thing I know for certain is that the idea hinged on my character-development-crush on the guy who should have won season 2 of Top Chef, Sam Talbot.
Initially, when I came up with the idea back in February 2007, my working title was Cover Model. I even still have the idea writeup I did back on February 20, 2007, so that I wouldn’t lose the idea . . .
TURNABOUT’S FAIR PLAY Character Introductions
I needed a third story idea. I knew the heroine would be the third of the best friends. Because I was an editor who’d been laid off from my job less than a year before, I decided the heroine of this third book would be an editor who would get laid off her job and, in the end, have to choose between romance and a job offer in New York. Thus, I needed a hero who would also have to make that kind of decision—between romance and a high-profile job. So, since I worked in advertising/marketing for 13+ years before entering the publishing industry, I decided to make him an account executive at a large advertising firm.
Now it’s your turn. Tell us the story behind your story. How did you get the idea for the book you’re writing (or for one you’ve already finished or for one you want to write)?
Reading Chat Monday: Noise or Silence When Reading?
I’ve mentioned many times that I can’t deal with total silence due to the constant ringing/whistling in my ears which gets more and more noticeable when there isn’t some other kind of noise to drown it out. So even when I’m reading, I prefer to have music playing in the background—instrumental music, though, so that lyrics don’t distract me from what I’m reading. However, if it’s a book I’m really enjoying, one I’m completely engrossed in, it doesn’t matter what’s going on around me—a busy waiting room or airport, or even a TV blaring in the background (though earbuds and an MP3 with music to offset it is helpful).
What about you?
Do you prefer silence when you’re reading, or can you read with music or noise in the background?
Fun Friday: The Olympics, Character-Name Winners, and Another Teaser Peek at the Cover of FOLLOW THE HEART

Let’s get right down to the most important business of the day . . .
THE OLYMPICS START TODAY!!!!!
By Gonzolito (Own work) [CC-BY-SA-3.0], via Wikimedia Commons
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Ten 2012 Olympians to Keep Your Eyes On
from mental_floss by Miss Cellania
- Thousands of athletes from all over the world are in London for the 2012 Olympics. Many of them are already stars, having trained their entire lives for this chance at gold. For some, getting there has been a struggle against poverty, politics, prejudice, and other disadvantages. Here are a few that you’ll want to know before you see them compete.
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Hotlympics: The Hunks of London 2012
by wheeler.tumblr

- The 2012 Summer Olympics, sponsored by McDonald’s, kick off in London on Friday. The quadrenniel event brings together some of the greatest athletes in the world, which means lots of very fit men exerting themselves in very tight or very little clothing. It’s a vital ogling occasion for dedicated man-fanciers.
(She lists FIFTY of them! And I don’t think any of them are on the list of Olympic eye-candy of the day that I’ll be posting on my Facebook page over the next two weeks starting Monday.)
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The 21 Countries With One Olympic Medal
by Jason Plautz

Twenty-one countries have won just one medal. Here are the stories of the national heroes who brought those medals home.
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QUIZ: Name the Countries With Over 100 Summer Olympic Medals
I got 23 out of 30. How many can you get?

By Marco Paköeningrat [CC-BY-SA-2.0], via Wikimedia Commons
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Okay . . . without further ado . . . the Name-the-Characters Winners are:
J M Gallagher and dingo4mum
Reginald Doncroft (template: Torrance Coombs)

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Amber and Ruth and Jolanthe
Sebastian Radclyffe (template: Max Brown)

And most of the rest of the names that I either haven’t used or aren’t already in my database are going in it! Thanks, everyone!
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Thursday Thought Provoker
Writer-Talk Tuesday: Creating a Writing Calendar
We writers talk a lot about word count and goals and writing every day. But have you ever actually sat down and written down daily goals?
Let me back up a minute. Even on a contracted deadline, having an overall goal—and writing it down—is a good idea.
Friday, I sat down with my planner and set myself a goal of having the first draft of An Honest Heart finished on September 15—or, one month prior to the date it’s due to be turned in. Then, based on the current word count (5,995 words) and my word-count goal for the rough draft (85,000+ words), I determined that I would need to write 1,385 words a day to hit that total word-count goal by September 15.
So I went through my planner day by day and wrote down the word count I should be at for each day to meet that September 15 goal. I also made sure that I wasn’t going to ignore those daily goals by making myself write down the actual word count achieved each day.
As you can see, I’m currently 4,345 words behind where I should have been yesterday (should have been at 11,540 if I had written those 1,385 needed words each day since Friday, but I’m only at 7,195). Which means I have some catching up to do this week. (And, yes, the cover of my planner is pretty much the exact same color as the background of my website.)
Fortunately, I’m taking a road trip this weekend, albeit a short one. I’m driving down to Birmingham, AL, on Friday to give a workshop to the RWA group down there—a workshop on Plotting for the Seat of the Pants writer. And as it’s one that I’ve done a few times now, that leaves me free to WRITE IN THE CAR going down and coming back. So, not only am I hoping to get caught up to where I should be before I leave on Friday, I’m hoping to be able to get a little bit ahead if at all possible this weekend.
Have you ever sat down and made a daily word-count-goal calendar? How do you keep track of your writing goals? How do you keep track of whether or not you’re meeting your word-count goals?
I Need Help Naming Secondary Characters
Because the names I’m coming up with are names I’ve already used (or names of real people coming forth from my subconscious), I’m turning to you, my readers, to help me name a couple of secondary characters in the second Great Exhibition book, An Honest Heart.
The two I need help with are the closest (and maybe only) friends of my male antagonist, the honorable Mr. Oliver Carmichael, son and heir of Baron Carmichael of Chawley Abbey.
Oliver Carmichael has always drawn the eye of all the girls with no exertion on his part—all the girls, that is, except seamstress Caddy Bainbridge. So, even though he has plans to marry Edith Buchanan, he places a bet with his friends that he can make Caddy fall in love with him before the opening day of the Great Exhibition.
Now, here’s an excerpt from the scene I wrote the other day in which he makes that bet:
- Name1 waved him over to the table. “Join us. Name2 has no heart for cards today, which means I have not been able to take the entirety of his allowance yet. Perhaps I can take half of yours as well, and that will make up for it.”
Oliver turned one of the two empty chairs at the small round table to the side and sat. He slid down into a posture of repose and stretched his legs in front of him, crossing them at the ankle. “I have no heart for cards myself.”
“I know why Name2 is dejected. His father informed him today he has come to terms with the daughter of Dr. _____ of Christ College and they will marry in London in May. If you have nothing to compare to that tragedy, then ante up.” Name1 began shuffling the cards.
Oliver launched into his tale of woe about how Caddy Bainbridge snubbed him and practically ordered him from her shop.
“She should have realized the honor of my presence there. M’lady wanted to send a servant with the message, but as I was already coming into Oxford, I volunteered to carry it for her. How could that . . . that . . . peasant treat me thusly?”
Name1 and Name2 had the audacity to laugh. “Alas, poor Carmichael. Snubbed by the seamstress.”
“Is she pretty?” Name2 asked.
“Prettier than Dr. _____’s daughter.”
“You are close to closing the deal with Miss Buchanan, are you not?” Name1 started dealing cards.
Oliver nodded.
“Then why worry about some no-name tradeswoman from North Parade and whether or not she falls at your feet? You have your choice of women now—though Miss Buchanan’s fifty thousand pounds would be tempting even if she were not a beautiful specimen of womanhood.”
“I could make Cadence Bainbridge fall at my feet, as you put it.” Oliver pressed his palms to the arms of the chair and pushed himself upright.
Name2 nodded slowly. “You could try. Make her realize what an insult she paid you—by wooing her, then walking away.”
Name1 seemed to forget the cards. He leaned forward. “And I say you cannot. Women like her are not easily charmed. Filled with ice and iron, they are, those confirmed spinsters.”
Oliver weighed the ideas of his two friends. “I’ll place money on it. Fifty pounds says I can make Cadence Bainbridge fall in love with me before . . .” When? How quickly could he work his magic on her? “By the day the Great Exhibition opens—May 1.”
“Make it one hundred, and you have yourself a wager.” Name1 extended his right hand across the table.
Oliver considered a moment, then took his friend’s hand. “One hundred pounds says I can make Miss Cadence Bainbridge fall desperately and completely in love with me.”
As you can see, it’s still pretty rough. But that’s because I plan to fix a bunch of stuff in edits. Obviously, I didn’t want to stop when writing and come up with names for the two friends. But now I’ve cast them, so I need names.
Here’s Name1 (template: Torrance Coombs)

And here’s Name2 (template: Max Brown)

I need old-fashioned, high-brow names for these two which will mark them as wealthy aristocrats in 1850s England.
Books are up for grabs here—whoever has the “winning” name for each character will receive a signed copy of An Honest Heart when it releases next year.
Fun Friday: Alternate literary character names. Call Me/Share It Maybe. A Sneak-Peek at the Cover of FOLLOW THE HEART. And more!

The iPad Typewriter Keyboard
It’s gotta be better than the bluetooth keyboard that came with my iPad!
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Bladorthin the Grey. Martin Pevensie. Hermione Puckle. Pansy O’Hara.
“17 Famous Literary Characters Almost Named Something Else”

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Oz, the Great and Powerful
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Team USA’s Olympics Opening Ceremony Uniforms


Really? High spiked heels for the female athletes? Skirts? What is this? 1954? Why can’t the women wear pants just like the men do? (Okay, okay, in the photo of the actual clothing, not the designer’s sketch, she’s wearing the same kind of white oxford shoes the men are wearing, but still.)
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Star Wars: Call Me Maybe
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Sesame Street: Share It Maybe
(I can’t decide which of those two videos is harder to understand.)
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Are You Left-Handed?
See if you agree with this list of “The 18 Worst Things for Left-Handed People”

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Quiz: Name the Longest U.S. State Borders

I got 9 out of 10. How did you do?
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A Teaser Peek at the Cover of Follow the Heart

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What fun/interesting things have you seen around the web this week?
Thursday Thought Provoker: Rainy Days









