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This is going to be one of those “entertainment-focused” weekends.

It started for me Thursday night with Part 1 of the three-part series finale of LOST.

Because it has already been announced that 2010 will be the final season, and because there are fewer than 40 episodes remaining, this has been a season of revelation—some surprises, but also some just confirming the theories we’ve been speculating about for the past three years. Last night’s episode served really as a setup for the two-hour season finale in two weeks. But they also managed to plant a little bit of doubt in my mind as to the survival of my favorite character, Desmond. On this show, once characters have resolved whatever problems they had in their lives before they arrived on the island, they have a tendency to die pretty grizzly deaths. Since he just discovered the communications room is packed full of C-4, my main thought was that if they kill off Desmond in the season finale, I’m going to be seriously peeved. I don’t think they can, because it seems like he’s too important to the “war” between Ben and Charles Widmore, but . . .

Okay, now for something that has a little more mass appeal (yes, I do realize that not everyone watches LOST, but at least I know Lori Benton is right there with me!).

In less than twelve hours, Ruth, Lori Lynch, and I will be at the theater caught up in the euphoria of seeing the newest Walden Media movie, The Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian, on opening night. I went and bought tickets last night to save us from having to stand in line, since we know it’s going to be crowded.

This is one of those movies in which I know I’ll be able to totally suspend disbelief and just enjoy it for what it is: a wonderful fantasy movie with a good message at its heart. I know the books and movies have their detractors. However, because I believe in the redemption message C.S. Lewis used allegory and fantasy to convey, I don’t have a problem with the overt spirituality present in the film. That said, the movie is getting its share of positive reviews as well:

“As a supposed family film, Prince Caspian might be a tad too long and a wee bit violent for the youngest of tykes. For most, however, the film stands a good chance of becoming the Empire Strikes Back of the ‘Narnia’ series: a darker and more satisfying follow-up to an already exceptional starting point, one that will be hard to top with future installments.”
~Edward Havens, Filmjerk.com

“[T]his is a grand and visually stunning epic with thrilling battle scenes and powerful themes. This one has more violence but also more humor, especially from the most welcome new character, a mouse with the heart of a lion and the voice of Eddie Izzard. Like the book, one of the less compelling of the seven-volume series, it is not as involving as the first. Barnes has a nice screen presence (though his accent sounds like he is trying out for a road show version of West Side Story as one of the Sharks). The pacing is strong, the effects are superb, and the battles are exciting. The themes are presented with a subtlety that encourages thoughtful consideration, with a range of possible interpretations.”
~Nell Minnow, Beliefnet.com’s “Movie Mom” Blog

“Enter Prince Caspian, a sequel that far and away surpasses its predecessor and is on the short list of superb fantasy epics. . . . it’s a very bloodless affair although it potentially could still be fairly intense for younger viewers, especially watching the Pevensie children dispose of their enemies. These aren’t naïve cutesy kids, but skilled warriors. Adamson taps into that childhood fantasy of being a heroic warrior fighting alongside magical creatures against stuffy, controlling adults bent on spoiling all the fun. . . . Add on cameos by Liam Neeson as Aslan and 2008 Best Supporting Actress Oscar winner Tilda Swinton and Caspian hits on all marks so effectively that its two-hour plus run time flies by so quickly you can hardly believe it’s over. If you even remotely liked the first installment, you’ll love Prince Caspian, one of the most entertaining film experiences I’ve had so far this year.”
~Jeffrey Lyles, RottenTomatoes.com

“[T]he Narnia books—and so far, the movies based on them—are wonderful as stories about childhood and its loss. Toward the end of Prince Caspian, it becomes clear that the two older children, Peter and Susan, are aging out of Narnia; they’ve crossed over to the world of grownups, and only Edmund and Lucy will be back for the next adventure. . . . The scene in which the kids bid farewell to the dreamlike world that’s become more real to them than their own has the emotional power of great children’s literature. Like Lewis Carroll’s Alice, L. Frank Baum’s Dorothy, or E.B. White’s Fern, the Pevensies live on the border between two realities, the mundane and the magical. For those of us who have long since lost the ability to cross over, it’s a pleasure to watch them make that journey.”
~Dana Stevens, Slate.com/National Public Radio

So get out and see it this weekend if at all possible!

Then, on Sunday, we have the two-hour conclusion of Cranford on PBS.

Just like in the best soap operas, things are getting stickier and stickier for our lovely ladies—and our few gentlemen—in the never-quiet, rarely peaceful town of Cranford. Gossip generated from half-heard conversations and misunderstandings bred from overactive imaginations lead to both humor and heartache for our characters, especially Sophy and Dr. Harrison. Before the miniseries ends, typhoid fever and an accident at the railroad construction site threaten the lives of two of our main characters—but don’t worry, the film ends on a happy note . . . and left me wishing BBC would make it into an ongoing series (that we wouldn’t have to wait more than a year for over here on this side of the Pond).

For a limited time, you can watch Cranford online at PBS’s website. This weekend’s episode should be available for viewing Monday. The DVD releases May 20.

Several weeks ago, I asked my favorite Romantic Comedy author if she would write a column on writing Romantic Comedy. She was wonderful enough to respond, even though she was in the process of getting ready for a trip to Bermuda. Here’s what Linda Windsor has to say about writing RomCom:

I really can’t say how to write humor. I have done a workshop about the structure of it, but as to the spark itself, I think you have to have sense of humor to start with. You have to have an eye to see the humor in almost anything. You have to take life’s most embarrassing moments and incorporate them into a scene that will work for the heroine/hero.

I wish I could say more, but there isn’t a formula for it. You take the mundane and “what if” it to funny. Or you take funny real life and incorporate it into a scene. So much of the funny things in my books are real. They happened to me or someone I know. Yep, I grew up with clowns. Not really. Just ordinary people who can laugh at themselves.

I had a friend who witnessed a fire in which someone murdered had been disposed. Her son went in and dragged out the body. It was freezing, so the cops set up office in friend’s hotel suite, at her compassionate invitation, to question the hysterical widow (Black Widow). A book was written about it, one of those dark true crime stories. But to hear my friend tell all the asides, it was hysterical. How she was hugging the murderer and nurturing her, not knowing she’d just shot a man in cold blood and set him on fire. How friend’s poor hubby, oblivious to all, tried to sleep in the other room while strangers kept coming in and sitting on side of his bed to use the phone. Someday, I might be able to use that. It’s all about perspective.

And of course, there is my infamous horseback ride in Jamaica, which is in IT HAD TO BE YOU: riding bareback in the water on the horse that ate Jamaica and dodging floating islands of fresh horsey pooh. “This wasn’t in the brochure!” was my direct quote. In my Piper Cove Chronicles, (WEDDING BELL BLUES) the crab debacle happened to me. Except I was on the kitchen counter, a mallot in each hand, while the critters crawled all over the floor. I could have used a hero. Instead, years later, I used that incident, my hysteria, in a book. It was NOT funny at the time.

The “What the Lord’s forgotten, you can pad with cotton” episode in FOR PETE’S SAKE, happened when that same girlfriend (who nurtured the murderer) and I went out years ago and she borrowed my dress. We stuffed the pre-formed bodice with paper towels and, as my friend danced the night away, she left a trail of paper towels and one of her bosoms was indented.

The wad pantyhose in the pant leg of my not so suave heroine in PAPER MOON was me. I felt this lump in my leg as I knelt to get goodies from a vending machine at work. Knowing something was amiss that I didn’t want to share with the men in the lunchroom, I hastened to my office, locked the door and investigated. Somehow pantyhose had managed to get in the leg of my slacks and, my not being the most alert in the morning, had not noticed. Except in my book, I carried it a little further.

Many know I lost my late husband four years ago. I hadn’t been to the huge cemetery but twice in my life and the day of his funeral, I wasn’t making a map. So there I was wandering through the tombstones, teary and feeling like the worst widow in the world. I mean, how can you lose your husband? Then I thought of him elbowing Jesus and telling Him, “Look, you only had to watch her. I’ve been living with that for 23 years!” And I laughed. A little later I found the gravesite and as I stared at my feet, I realized not only was I a ditz for losing poor Jim, but I was wearing a navy and a black shoe…of different heel heights! I could imagine the head-shaking going on in heaven. Sad, heart-breaking, yet funny. And my dear hubby had the greatest laugh of all, of that I’m certain. He delighted in my ditziness. Couldn’t wait to see what I’d do next.

It’s all in perspective. At least that’s the “magic” that works for me.

If any of you have ever gotten an e-mail from me, you know that my tagline under my “signature” is Inspirational Fiction with a Sense of Humor. But up until I started graduate school in 2004, I wouldn’t have categorized what I wrote as humorous. Why? Because I took myself and my writing too seriously. I’m the kind of person who is very easily embarrassed by even the littlest mishap, and it’s only been in the past few years that I’ve learned not to take myself so seriously. Because of that, I didn’t want to put my characters into any kind of situation that I would personally find uncomfortable. I struggled for nearly six months, once I realized I needed to infuse humor into my writing, to allow things to happen to my characters, or for them to have internal reactions to conflicts, that were funny—or at least smile inducing. During that time, I read all of Linda Windsor’s contemporary romances (my favorite is Along Came Jones), and then took several workshops she taught and listened to her talk about how she takes situations she’s experienced and incorporates them into her stories—and they’re always the funniest scenes in her books.

As Linda points out above, you can’t force humor. I’ve never made a secret of the fact that I cannot stand Jim Carrey, Adam Sandler, Ben Stiller, and, most especially, Will Farrell. Aside from the fact that most of their humor is, simply, juvenile and degrading, I don’t like them for the most part because they try to force the humor. They do stupid things in their movies or comedy acts just for the sake of getting the cheap laugh—and many of the jokes are at someone else’s expense. But I know there are a lot of people who think they’re some of the funniest people to walk the face of the earth. (I know, I’m sounding like a curmudgeon.)

In writing, the humor needs to evolve naturally out of your own personality. What do you find funny? When is the last time you laughed so hard you cried (or nearly peed your pants)? Have you ever laughed hard and long enough that your stomach and face muscles ached for a while afterward? What made you laugh like that? What kind of comedy movies/shows do you enjoy? What’s the last novel you read that made you laugh? Have you ever analyzed why these make you laugh?

For Discussion:
Who is you favorite comedian? What’s your favorite romantic comedy movie? Who’s your favorite RomCom author? Book? Can a romance be humorous without being a romantic comedy?

A question came up at my local writing group’s monthly meeting Saturday: what’s the difference between Historical Romance and a Historical? (Oh, and BTW, I do use “a” with the word “historical” based on CMS 5.73 which says to use “a” if the “h” sound is pronounced. If I pronounced it ‘istorical, I’d use “an.” Just to head that argument off at the pass!)

Though it would seem like there would be an easy answer to this (and there is, to some extent), in the historical category, there’s a little more of a gray area where the lines get blurred.

The easy answer is this: a historical romance is a romance novel that’s set prior to the Vietnam war (or WWII, depending on the publishing house). Remember, the definition of a romance novel is that the storyline focuses on the developing relationship between the hero and heroine—if the romance is taken out, there is no more story. Historical novels are stories that take place in a historical setting which are more about the effect of that setting on the characters—whether it’s a war, the frontier, or the Protestant Revolution. There might be a romance that occurs in the story, but it’s a subplot. For example: Georgette Heyer wrote historical romances (Regencies); Jeff and Michael Shaara wrote/write historical fiction. Gone with the Wind is historical women’s fiction (it’s about Scarlett’s internal journey and how the events of history effected that journey); John Jakes’s North & South trilogy is historical fiction (it’s about the friendship between Orry and George and how they interacted with and were involved in the historical events).

The answer gets harder when we take into account that many historical stories include a grand romance as part of the storyline. It might not be the main focus of the plot, but it is integral to the story—the main plot just wouldn’t be of any interest without it.

Historicals also tend to be trilogies or even longer series, and, even if a romance is integral to the plot of the story, such as in J.M. Hochstetler’s American Patriot series, the romance may not be resolved for seven or eight volumes (or more—please not more, Joan!). The entire series is a romance, because the overarching thread is the love story between Elizabeth and Carleton, who are torn apart by the eruption of the Revolutionary War. Each individual book can be considered historical fiction, as it doesn’t follow the seven basic beats of the romance novel—and though each has a satisfying ending (that leaves us wanting more!), it isn’t a happily ever after ending. Once the series as a whole is complete, I’m certain that we could apply the seven beats to the entire story and we’ll see the romance “novel.”

See how the definitions get muddied?

Oh, and just to add one more facet to the definition: the works of Jane Austen, the Brontes, Elizabeth Gaskell, etc., are not considered “historical” romance—because they were contemporary romances when they were written—set during the time period in which they were actually written. A true “historical” is written by someone not living in the time period in which the story is set.

For Discussion:
Who here reads historical romances? Who are your favorite authors? Who is writing historicals/historical romances? Can you define from this whether your story is a historical or a historical romance?

I’m pleased to introduce (for those of you who don’t already read her blog regularly) Patricia Woodside, a dear writing sister I met online and whose writing journey I’ve been following for the last couple of years. 

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I love romance.  I especially love Christian romance.  It’s uplifting as well as feel-good romantic, and like secular romance, it comes in multiple varieties:  contemporary, historical, suspense, etc.  However, there’s one flavor that’s all too often missing:  African American Christian romance.  In fact, there is such a dearth of these books that when one looks at bookstore or library shelves, one has to wonder such a thing even exists.

Before I get hit on the head, let me point out there are a number of successful African American (AA) authors writing and publishing Christian fiction.  Victoria Christopher Murray, Jacquelin Thomas, and ReShonda Tate Billingsley are longstanding successes.  Tia McCollors, Claudia Mair Burney, Marilynn Griffith, and Angela Benson are among the more recent multi-published AA Christian authors.  Then brand new authors, like Sheila Lipsey, Keshia Dawn, Leslie Sherrod, and Kimberly Cash Tate are making their debuts. 

However, most AA Christian fiction is more than plain, simple romance. Many are ensemble stories featuring multiple heroines, and are bigger, broader stories that are more likely categorized as women’s fiction. 

On the secular side of the market, pure AA romance can be found in offerings from Harlequin and a variety of other publishers.  In fact, the sub-genre was popular enough that in 2007, Harlequin purchased Arabesque/BET Books and now releases eight or more romantic stories monthly of varying sensuality featuring African American heroes and heroines under the Kimani Press imprint.

But where is the African American Christian romance?

One might ask why there is a need for AA Christian romance.  After all, if it’s the spiritual message that African American readers desire, they can find that in a host of Christian books.  Harlequin also publishes the Steeple Hill Love Inspired imprint, which has included AA stories by Felicia Mason, and Heartsong Presents has published AA stories by Aisha Ford and Cecelia Dowdy.  So there’s been limited success at least in category romance, where recently even a few white authors have taken on multicultural characters, an effort I wholeheartedly applaud.

For me, it is not an issue of exclusion but rather one of inclusion.  Although our God is the same and we may even worship together, AA Christians daily reside within our darker skins.  Like it or not, that aspect of our being colors our world.  Occasionally, when reading a book where the author doesn’t dwell on the physical characteristics of the characters, or where those characteristics are somewhat ambiguous—dark hair and dark eyes, for example—I find myself picturing the characters as looking like me.

Just as years ago the need for African American dolls was proven in order to build and support the self-esteem of young African American children(1), I argue there is a need for AA Christian romance.  AA Christians need to read about characters who look like them, talk like them, and who may act in a culturally familiar manner as they are challenged and grow in their faith.  Heroes and heroines of like ethnicity as the reader removes the final barrier preventing the reader from making a full and deep connection with the characters. 

Is it simply a matter of coloring the characters African American?

A resounding NO.

The romance remains the central story but that romance is highlighted by our unique culture.   The African American community is not a monolith but we do have aspects of our culture that tie us together. 

Like food.  In an African American novel, food scenes might include ribs or fried chicken, smothered pork chops, macaroni and cheese, candied yams, collard greens, stuffing, gravy, and homemade rolls.  Recipe for a heart attack?  Yes, but not an uncommon meal in the AA community.  Throw in some West Indian blood and it might include coconut rice, curried goat, roti, and plaintain.  Add some African to the mix and it might include injera, a flat bread; doro wat, a spicy chicken stew; jollof rice; peanut stew; or couscous.

There’s our worship style. The liveliness of our worship, as demonstrated in many predominantly African American churches every Sunday morning, might include large hand-clapping choirs singing to foot-stomping rhythms played by fully orchestrated bands.  There might be praise dancers and flag teams.  Nurses’ units provide relief and comfort when the Spirit gets a bit too high; the preacher delivers the message with a particular rhythmic cadence; and of course, there’s the parade of fashion that often verges on what others might consider evening wear—hats, suits and dresses adorned with sequins, feathers, gems, and whatever else might make an attractive statement.  Then too the role of the church in African American life is based on its historical roots, and includes education, self-empowerment, political activism, social service, and economic advancement.  Furthermore, AA stories may be affected by the extent to which race, along with social, political, and economic factors, dictates the characters’ priorities and challenges.

Remember though that the African American community is a vast and varied one.  Thus, it is necessary to watch out for stereotypes.  The dinner I described above is definitely stereotypical.  As with all stereotypes, however, it is rooted in truth.  But African Americans eat other things too, like Cornish hens, beef stroganoff, scalloped potatoes, julienned carrots, stir-fry, fondue, and caviar, not foods normally associated with us.

Not all African Americans speak in an ethnically identifiable manner, or if they do, they may be selective about when, where, and among whom.

Not all African Americans attend churches with the Pentecostal worship style I also described above, another stereotype.  There are many African American Lutherans, Methodists, Episcopalians, like my mother who frowns on the “noise” in my more animated church setting.

Not all African Americans know or are involved with the criminal element of society.

Not all African Americans live in poor or struggling neighborhoods.

Not all African Americans play certain sports, dance well, rap, or sing.

As much as we are different, we have a lot in common with the majority American culture because we too are American.  We celebrate many of the same holidays with many of the same traditions.  We speak and write proper English and expect our children to do the same.  We aspire to be well-educated, financially sound, and to live well, which does not necessarily mean displaying the “bling-bling” too often negatively associated with our culture. We live in nice neighborhoods and our children attend nice schools.

There is a fine line between creating culturally identifiable characters and stereotyping.  There is also a fine line between creating characters that more closely resemble the majority culture and running the risk of those same characters being deemed “unbelievable”, as what happened with the popular sitcom of the 1980’s, The Cosby Show.  To this day, I’m still trying to figure out what’s so unbelievable about an African American pediatrician and African American lawyer parenting five kids in an upscale brownstone in Brooklyn.  When it comes to African American characterization, there’s too often a definite double-standard and an emphasis on the negative for the purposes of commercial success. 

All of this makes for added difficulty in crafting the African American Christian romance.  Shaking up those stereotypes, and going beyond them to tell a tale that reflects universal issues, is both a consideration and a challenge for those who might pen AA Christian romance and for those who edit and publish it.

Bottom line: African American Christian Romance is an underserved segment of the fiction market.

African Americans represent roughly 13% of the U.S. population and these numbers don’t include people of African descent who also claim Hispanic or some other origin, like me, who are now designated “multi-racial.”  According to the U.S. Department of State, Blacks are the group most likely to report a religious affiliation. More than three-fourths are Protestant(2).  That’s a large number of folks who would be hard-pressed to identify ethnically with the characters in the average Christian romance novel. 

Let’s do the math: 75% of 13% of 300 million is approximately 29 million people.  Then, about 37% of African Americans read fiction so let’s assume that holds true for African American Christians(3).  The result is a reader population of nearly 11 million people.  Keep in mind that a popular fiction book is considered a success if it sells a mere 5,000 copies(4). 

So here’s to hoping we see a lot more African American Christian fiction.  I’m working hard to make sure that we do!

1. http://www.loc.gov/exhibits/brown/brown-brown.html
2. http://www.america.gov/st/diversity-english/2008/March/20080313140042xlrennef0.357403.html
3. http://www.parapublishing.com/sites/para/resources/statistics.cfm
4. http://www.parapublishing.com/sites/para/resources/statistics.cfm

Patricia Woodside describes herself as an I.T. Professional, Pastor’s Wife, Mother, and Writer. She blogs about life and writing at http://readinnwritin.blogspot.com. 

As I announced Thursday, this week, I signed contracts for two additional books with Barbour. Many of you have been asking what they’re about, so here are the blurbs for Menu for Romance and A Case for Love:

Executive Chef Major O’Hara has foresworn love, knowing he could never saddle the woman he loves with a family situation like his. But when it seems he’s about to lose Meredith Guidry to another man, he realizes he must concoct a MENU FOR ROMANCE to win her back.

When Forbes Guidry is asked to take over a pro bono case for a colleague, he must decide between doing what’s right or turning a blind eye on the fact his parents’ corporation is about to put many small family-owned companies out of business. Can TV society-reporter Alaine Delacroix help this jaded lawyer make A CASE FOR LOVE?

The second part of Cranford airs this Sunday on most PBS stations.

As winter approaches, Cranford is beset by sorrows
and struggles to regain confidence.

Like the second act of any dramatic work, the second part of Cranford is most likely the darkest, most conflict-filled. It is lovingly and beautifully written and acted—the whole thing is—so be sure to tune in.

I started reading the first of the three books upon which the miniseries is based, Cranford, last weekend. Not only was I amazed at how well Heidi Thomas interpreted the mostly-narrative style of the work into action and dialogue, but I was floored by how totally different Mrs. Gaskell’s writing style is from the style she employed in North & South. Reading Cranford is like reading a breezy, conversational hen lit novel. Here’s my favorite passage so far:

When Mrs. Forrester, for instance, gave a party in her baby-house of a dwelling . . . [we] talked on about household forms and ceremonies as if we all believed that our hostess had a regular servants’ hall, second table, with housekeeper and steward, instead of the one little charity-school maiden, whose short ruddy arms could never have been strong enough to carry the tray upstairs, if she had not been assisted in private by her mistress, who now sat in state, pretending not to know what cakes were sent up, though she knew, and we knew, and she knew that we knew, and we knew that she knew that we knew she had been busy all the morning making tea-bread and sponge-cakes.

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Now, for some more actor connections, this time to the Horatio Hornblower movies!

Greg Wise (Sir Charles Maulver) played Major Andre Cotard in Hornblower: Duty and Loyalty.

Barbara Flynn (Mrs. Jamieson) played Mrs. Mason in Hornblower: Duty and Loyalty.

Philip Glenister (Mr. Carter) played Gunner Hobbs in Hornblower: Mutiny and Retribution.

Julia Sawalha (Miss Jessie Brown) played Maria Mason-Hornblower in Hornblower: Duty and Loyalty.

Jim Carter (Captain Brown) played Etheridge in Hornblower: Duty.

Simon Woods (Dr. Harrison) was in Rome (HBO series) with Ray Stevenson, who was in King Arthur with Ioan Gruffudd (Horatio Hornblower), and Ciaran Hinds, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd. Was in Angel with Romola Garai, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd (Horatio). Was in Cambridge Spies with Samuel West (Major Edrington, Hornblower: Frogs & Lobsters).

Judi Dench (Matty Jenkyns) was in Ladies in Lavender with David Warner (Capt. James Sawyer, Mutiny and Retribution); Toby Jones, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd; and Dame Maggie Smith, who was in Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets with Christian Coulson (M’man Jack Hammond, Hornblower:Loyalty).

Lisa Dillon (Mary Smith) was in Hawking with Benedict Cumberbatch, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd; was in Bright Young Things with Jim Carter (Etheridge, Hornblower: Duty) and Stephen Campbell Moore, who was also in Amazing Grace; was in Cambridge Spies with Samuel West (Major Edrington, Frogs & Lobsters).

Imelda Staunton (Miss Pole) was in Bright Young Things with Jim Carter (Etheridge, Duty) and Stephen Campbell Moore, who was also in Amazing Grace; was in Cambridge Spies with Samuel West (Major Edrington, Frogs & Lobsters). Was in Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix with Jim McManus (Pawnbroker, Hornblower: Loyalty).

Julia McKenzie (Mrs. Forrester) was in Bright Young Things with Jim Carter (Etheridge, Duty) and Stephen Campbell Moore, who was also in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd.

Alex Etel (Harry Gregson) was in Millions with Christopher Fulford (M’man Hunter, Hornblower: The Duchess and the Devil).

Kimberly Nixon (Miss Hutton) is in the upcoming Easy Virtue with Georgie Glen, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd and who also guest-starred in an episode of the TV series My Family starring Sir Robert Lindsay (Admiral Sir Edward Pellew). She was in Wild Child with Shirley Henderson, who was in Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets with Christian Coulson (M’man Jack Hammond, Loyalty).

Deborah Findlay (Miss Tomkinson) was in Vanity Fair with Romola Garai, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd (Horatio), and was in Wives & Daughters with Barbara Flynn (Mrs. Mason, Duty and Loyalty).

Selina Griffiths (Caroline Tomkinson) was in The Scarlet Pimpernel (1999) with Jonathan Coy (Lt./Capt. Bracegirdle, Hornblower: The Fire Ships, The Duchess and the Devil, Frogs & Lobsters, Duty) and Jim Carter (Etheridge, Duty).

Claudie Blakley (Martha) was in The Inspector Lynley Mysteries: Seed of Cunning with Tony Haygarth (Master Prowse, Duty and Loyalty). Was in Gosford Park with Maggie Smith, who was in Harry Potter/Chamber of Secrets with Christian Coulson (M’man Hammond, Loyalty) and HP/Order of the Phoenix with Jim McManus (Pawnbroker, Loyalty).

Francesca Annis (Lady Ludlow) was in Jericho: A Pair of Ragged Claws with Sir Robert Lindsay (Admiral Sir Edward Pellew) and Nicholas Jones (Lt. Buckland, Mutiny and Retribution). Was in Wives & Daughters with Barbara Flynn (Mrs. Mason, Duty and Loyalty).

Emma Fielding (Miss Galindo) was in The Inspector Lyndley Mysteries: A Great Deliverance with Nicholas Day, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd (Horatio).

Adrian Scarborough (Mr. Johnson) was in Gosford Park with Maggie Smith, who was in Harry Potter/Chamber of Secrets with Christian Coulson (M’man Hammond, Loyalty) and HP/Order of the Phoenix with Jim McManus (Pawnbroker, Loyalty). Was in Bright Young Things with Jim Carter (Etheridge, Duty) and Stephen Campbell Moore, who was also in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd. Was in Maxwell with Duncan Bell (M’man Clayton, Hornblower: The Even Chance).

Andrew Buchan (Jem Hearne) was in If I Had You with Paul McGann (Lt. William Bush, Mutiny, Retribution, Duty, and Loyalty).

Joseph McFadden (Dr. Marshland) was in Small Faces with Ian McElhinney (Capt. Hammond, The Fire Ships, Retribution, and Loyalty).

Eileen Atkins (Miss Deborah Jenkyns) was in Gosford Park with Maggie Smith, who was in Harry Potter/Chamber of Secrets with Christian Coulson (M’man Hammond, Loyalty) and HP/Order of the Phoenix with Jim McManus (Pawnbroker, Loyalty). Was in Vanity Fair with Romola Garai, who was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd (Horatio). Was in Marple: Towards Zero with Greg Wise (Maj. Cotard, Duty and Loyalty).

Michael Gambon (Mr. Holbrook) was in HP/Order of the Phoenix with Jim McManus (Pawnbroker, Loyalty). Was in Amazing Grace with Ioan Gruffudd (Horatio). Was in Wives & Daughters with Barbara Flynn (Mrs. Mason, Duty and Loyalty).

Today at lunch, I have to brave the spring rains and drive a couple of blocks over to the post office. Going to the P.O. isn’t something that I do very often. I buy my regular stamps at Walgreens. I do all of my banking electronically. My agent takes everything through e-mail. So why am I risking losing the good parking space I got this morning and going out in the bad weather to go to the post office?

To mail back to Barbour the contracts I signed last night for Menu for Romance and A Case for Love, the two follow-up books to Stand-In Groom! Yes—I now have a three-book deal with Barbour. The series’ working title is either “Bonneterre Brides” or “Brides of Bonneterre.” Menu for Romance is due December 1, 2008, and A Case for Love is due July 1, 2009. As soon as I find out the tentative release dates, I’ll be sure to post that info here.

Unless you’ve been hiding under a rock (and therefore have no idea who she is), you’re bound to be as excited as I am that Camy Tang wrote today’s column. One of the aspects of writing the romance novel I really wanted to highlight in this series is the ever expanding diversity of characters we’re finding. Today, Camy shares with us her experience about breaking into the market with stories focused on Asian-American characters.

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When I first started to seriously write fiction, I originally wrote ethnic-neutral characters. I was also relatively new to writing and didn’t understand good characterization or I would have realized a writer can’t get away with a character with no background. LOL

But after a while, I got the idea that maybe I should write Asian American characters. After all, write what you know, right? The problem was that at the time, there were very few Asian novels and not a huge demand for ethnic romances.

But God is in control. At a writer’s conference, while being prayed for, I received a word from God to “write my heritage.” I hadn’t told anyone I was thinking of writing Asian characters, of doing anything so risky, so this was a profound affirmation of God’s will for me.

I plunged in and started revising my story with a Japanese American character. But at the same time, I did some extensive research of the market.

I would strongly suggest this for any writer, whether you write ethnic fiction or not. Whatever you decide your brand is, do the research on other novels similar to yours in the market. It will help you craft a stronger proposal that will be more likely to catch an editor’s eye.

For example, at the time I wrote my first Asian American novel, I looked at what other novels had been published with Asian characters in both the Christian and mainstream market. In the Christian market, there were very few, and they all fell into either historical fiction or contemporary fiction genres. There were more novels in the mainstream market, but again they almost all fell into one of four genres: historical fiction, contemporary or women’s fiction, suspense, and erotica. There were exactly three Asian chick lit novels in print.

Also, most Asian American novels were about first or second generation Asian Americans. The cultural struggles of a first or second generation is subtly different from those of Asians who are their third, fourth, or fifth generation in the States.

There were almost no romances, nothing light or humorous.

This was good news for me, because I tend to like light, fun, humorous romances. I wrote my first Asian chick lit (which, consequently, was very very bad).

Since there were no Asian American romantic suspense novels in the Christian market, I also wrote a romantic suspense.

I wouldn’t have so specifically targeted light romance and romantic suspense if I hadn’t done my research and known what WASN’T being published in the Christian (and mainstream) markets. If I’d done a contemporary fiction or historical fiction novel, my story wouldn’t have stood out from any of the other Christian contemporary fiction or historical fiction novels with Asian characters that were already in print.

Because my proposal was so unique, it caught the eye of Sue Brower, who at the time was the Marketing Director at Zondervan. My Asian American chick lit hook intrigued her, and she encouraged Karen Ball (at the time, the Senior Editor) to take another look at my proposal. So, it was my proposal hook in addition to my writing that got me that second look.

I had also noticed that many romance and women’s fiction readers don’t like first person tense, and so I deliberately wrote my novels in third person in order to appeal to more readers. This decision paid off because I believe more people are willing to read my novels since they aren’t in first person. My publishing house recognizes that and respects my willingness to adjust to reach a wider reader demographic.

Since my novels have come out, I’ve had mostly good reviews, a few bad ones. They don’t surprise me, because let’s face it—none of us is going to write a book that appeals to EVERYBODY.

But what I love about reader letters is that so many people who are not Asian completely related to the family dynamics of the Sakai cousins. I’ve had people who say, “My German/Norwegian/Italian/you-name-it grandmother is exactly like Grandma Sakai!” It just goes to show that no matter the ethnicity, all families are alike. That was the appeal of stories like The Joy Luck Club, Bend It Like Beckham, and My Big Fat Greek Wedding.

So I guess you could say that my writing journey was instigated by God’s word to me, and carried through with the market research I did. I think that writers these days need a combination of both trust in God and business savvy.

My next novel, Single Sashimi, comes out in August and I’m very excited about it because it’s my favorite one in the series. After that … who knows? I’m open to God’s leading, but I’m pretty sure it’ll still be in my brand of Asian American romance.

Camy Tang is the loud Asian chick who writes loud Asian chick lit. She used to be a biologist, but now she is a staff worker for her church youth group and leads a worship team for Sunday service. She also runs the Story Sensei fiction critique service. On her blog, she gives away Christian novels every Monday and Thursday, and she ponders frivolous things like dumb dogs (namely, hers), coffee-geek husbands (no resemblance to her own…), the writing journey, Asiana, and anything else that comes to mind. Visit her website at http://www.camytang.com/ and sign up for her newsletter YahooGroup for monthly giveways!

It is difficult to explain the appeal of romance novels to people who don’t read them. Outsiders tend to be unable to interpret the conventional language of the genre or to recognize in that language the symbols, images, and allusions that are the fundamental stuff of romance. Moreover, romance writers are consistently attacked for their use of this language by critics who fail to fathom its complexities. In a sense, romance writers are writing in a code clearly understood by readers but opaque to others.
Linda Barlow and Jayne Ann Krentz, “Beneath the Surface: The Hidden Codes of Romance,” Dangerous Men and Adventurous Women

When a reader picks up a romance novel, she comes to it with certain subconscious expectations in mind as to the development of the characters and their relationship, the plot, and the ultimate ending. When an author fails to follow through on meeting these expectations, the romance reader feels let down, betrayed even. It is this “code” which creates such antipathy for romance novels in the general public while keeping readers returning again and again to buy more books. Barlow and Krentz take this one step further to point out that it is not just the structure of the stories that carry expectations, but the language—the “diction”—of the genre that draws the reader in. They believe romance readers are trained through their reading to recognize turns of phrase or word constructs and respond with a deep emotional connection to the story and the characters. In fact, they posit, the reader looks for these constructs, wanting to relive these emotions with each book they read (21). Readers also expect character development and the relationship between hero and heroine to be the main focus of the story, and through the use of “descriptive code,” they expect a detailed description of the characters’ physical characteristics (24).

Knowing that, when I read a romance novel, I expect to see a certain flow of words, certain physical and emotional reactions described in symbolic language. Therefore, it is not just in story structure that I follow the conventional structure of the genre (the seven beats) when I write. I also incorporate the subconsciously sought-after turns of phrase to connect the reader with my story as well as connect my story with the genre; for example, in Stand-In Groom when Anne first meets George, she gazes “into eyes the color of light-roast cinnamon hazelnut coffee, and her heart fluttered.” George appreciates Anne’s “shapely figure” and “Wedgwood-blue eyes.” Throughout the novel, eyes sparkle, pulses race, hearts thunder, toes curl, and cheeks burn. (Because I am writing my novel for the Christian audience, however, that is as far as the physical sensuality goes.)

Because the language of romance is more lushly symbolic and metaphorical than ordinary discourse, the reader is stimulated not only to feel but also to analyze, interpret, and understand.
Barlow/Krentz

There are some romance authors who would say that the language of romance novels is more akin to that of poetry than it is to other fiction genres.

But much has changed since Barlow and Krentz wrote this essay, published in 1992. Yes, romance readers still look for those descriptions, the metaphors and similes, the poetic devices, but romance writers have evolved, have learned to be more subtle with them, more delicate . . . more natural, less purple.

Aha. There’s that term. Purple prose. What exactly does that mean? Well, let’s see if I can’t show you:

Caught up in the tender savagery of love . . . she saw him, felt him, knew him in a manner that, for an instant, transcended the physical. It was as if their souls yearned toward each other, and in a flash of glory, merged and became one. (Linda Barlow, Fires of Destiny)

Savagery . . . transcended . . . souls yearned . . . yowsa. Getting pretty purple there. In recent years, the genre has started trending away from these kinds of overblown descriptions, words and language that the characters themselves wouldn’t really use in real life:

The glow of the dying firelight highlighted his handsome features. His was the kind of face stonecutters fashioned elegies from. Clean lines, chiseled to the right proportion. Handsome. A girlish sigh built in her chest . . . (Linda Windsor, Maire)

See the difference in the two passages? Linda Windsor’s prose still taps into that “coded” language, but it’s not so overly dramatic that it becomes purple.

For Discussion:
Just for fun, take a three to four sentence paragraph from your WIP and rewrite it as purple as you can and post it here. Use lots of flowery adjectives and overblown emotions. Use clichés.

Was it hard or easy to do? Do you think you can identify purple prose in your own work? In others’?

I don’t usually publish series posts on Sundays, but we still have a lot to cover in this discussion!

Last week, we looked at Billy Mernit’s seven beats of the romance storyline, first with his definitions, then with examples of the first five. Let’s round out the discussion with the two final beats, the ones that seemed to generate the most confusion/comments last week.

6. The Dark Moment/Crisis

Wherein the consequences of the swivel decision yield disaster; generally, the humiliating scene where private motivations are revealed, and either the relationship and/or the protagonist’s goal is seemingly lost forever. (115)

When we talk about the general structure of the romance novel, this is the “boy loses girl, seemingly forever” part. This is when the conflict between them rises to such a crescendo that it seems insurmountable.

Continuing the illustration with Jude Deveraux’s historical romance The Velvet Promise, the dark moment comes when—after Gavin and Judith have reunited, forgiven each other for everything that’s come before, and admitted they love each other—Judith is kidnapped by Gavin’s former lover, Alice (remember the one who created the first and second turning points [steps 3 & 5]). Now crazed because Gavin has given her up, Alice threatens to pour boiling oil on Judith’s face to steal her beauty and, she believes, regain Gavin’s love (kind of a “who’s the fairest of them all” scenario). Gavin arrives—his only thought of saving Judith, yet still not wanting to believe that Alice is the deceitful, manipulative woman of loose morals everyone has been trying to tell him she is. When Alice greets him, he finally sees her for what she is—an obsessed, crazed woman. For Gavin, his dark moment comes when he realizes how foolish he’s been in always defending Alice, in always believing she was as close to an angel as a human could get, and that because of this, he stands a very real chance of losing the woman he truly loves, Judith. For Judith, the dark moment comes when Alice drags her up onto the rooftop to try to get away from Gavin (Judith is terrified of heights). She believes she is about to die.

7. Joyful Defeat/Resolution

A reconciliation that reaffirms the primal importance of the relationship; usually a happy ending that implies marriage or a serious commitment, often at the cost of some personal sacrifice to the protagonist. (116)

This seems to be the point that generated the most questions/confusion. What did Mernit mean by “personal sacrifice”? Does that mean that to be together, the hero and/or heroine has to give something up in order for the romance to have a HEA ending? No, not necessarily.

Here is the step from The Velvet Promise (Jude Deveraux, published by Pocket Books, copyright 1981):

Alice fell backward, away from the edge, thanks to the sacrifice of her maid. But the pot of oil in her hand fell with her, spilling across her forehead and cheek. She began to scream horribly.

Gavin made one leap across the roof to where Judith still clung. Her extreme fear of heights and her resulting iron grip on the chimney had saved her life. . . .

“Look what you’ve done to me!” Alice screamed through her pain. . . .

“No,” Gavin answered, looking at Alice’s mutilated face with great pity. “It was not I nor Judith who has harmed you, but only yourself.” . . .

Gavin took Judith down the stairs to the room below. . . . “It’s over now, my love,” Gavin whispered. “You are safe now. She will harm you no more.” . . .

“What will happen to her now?” Judith asked quietly.

“I don’t know. I could give her to the courts, but I think perhaps she’s been punished enough. No longer will her beauty ensnare men.”

Judith looked up at him in surprise and studied his face.

“You look at me as if you’re seeing me for the first time,” he said.

“Maybe I am. You’re free of her.”

“I have told you before that I no longer loved her.”

“Yes, but there was always a part of you that was hers, a part I couldn’t touch. But now she no longer possesses you. You are mine—totally and completely mine.”

“And that pleases you?”

“Yes,” she whispered. “It pleases me greatly.”

The “personal sacrifice” Gavin has made here is that he saw his first love for what she really was. The rose-colored glasses were torn from his eyes and he was forced to see reality (and, as mentioned above in his dark moment, realize that his willful blindness to Alice’s faults put Judith’s life—and that of the child she lost—at risk). This book closes with a “commitment” HEA ending—because Judith and Gavin are already married. In arranged/forced-marriage stories, usually historicals, you’ll usually find this kind of an ending—a reconciliation of the couple and something that indicates their marriage will be happy. And both of these steps—from Judith’s kidnapping to the ending, quoted above—take place in the last nine pages of the book.

The “personal sacrifice” that Mernit mentions can be equated to whatever internal journey the characters have throughout the book. It’s the change they need to make in their lives—whether emotional, spiritual, or even physical (moving, changing jobs, etc.)—that will allow them to make that commitment to the other person. It can also be one of the characters facing his or her greatest fear (such as flying, heights, water, etc.), because the thought of losing the other is actually worse than the long-held fear.

In Catherine Marshall’s Christy (not technically a romance, but a women’s fiction with a strong romantic thread), it is Dr. McNeil’s prayer at Christy’s sickbed, when he gives up the tight control he’s always tried to hold over his life to God. In The Wedding Planner, it is Steve realizing he’s making a mistake if he marries Fran and going on a mad rush to try to find Mary, because he finally realizes he chose to marry Fran for the wrong reasons. In You’ve Got Mail, it’s when Kathleen goes to the park to meet her online beau only to discover it’s Joe Fox—and she realizes that, even though she’s railed against him and tried to keep from falling for him, she really loves him.

For Discussion:
Is your dark moment dark enough? What about some that are too dark so that they become melodramatic? How long are these two steps in your WIP or last completed manuscript? If you haven’t gotten that far, pick out a favorite book and see how many pages it takes to complete these two steps.