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		<title>By: Writing Series Spotlight: Beyond the First Draft and Manuscript 101 &#171; KayeDacus.com</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] The Down-and-Dirty Guide to Critiquing Beyond the First Draft—Reviewing, Revising, Readjusting Beyond the First Draft–The Four Secrets Beyond the First Draft–Clarity Beyond the First Draft–Starting the Revision Process Beyond the [...]]]></description>
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		<title>By: Erica Vetsch</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Aug 2007 02:12:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I always print out a hard copy to read aloud to someone else. This helps me with the dialogue, to make it sound realistic. And I need my Bic Crystal pen to make edits.  I have a drawer in my new desk where I keep all of the research materials for double checking facts. 

I too set chapter type goals when revising.  Enough that I don&#039;t get discouraged. I also tend to follow a thread through the story revising an entire storyline at one time rather than as I come to it.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I always print out a hard copy to read aloud to someone else. This helps me with the dialogue, to make it sound realistic. And I need my Bic Crystal pen to make edits.  I have a drawer in my new desk where I keep all of the research materials for double checking facts. </p>
<p>I too set chapter type goals when revising.  Enough that I don&#8217;t get discouraged. I also tend to follow a thread through the story revising an entire storyline at one time rather than as I come to it.</p>
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